If I had to do it over again, I wouldn’t have included that last line.
And, no, that’s not a submission. I’m not suggesting that the dog is thinking that. I’m just saying that my frist contribution would have been stronger if I left it more up to the viewer and didn’t feel obliged to spell it out for him/her.
We are waste haulers. We see some interesting things and get into some interesting situations. Some of them gross, some funny, all true. And most of it secret - until now. This is where we share the things we don't want to forget.
“Fuck! I hate this god damn hair! Fuck!… (whimpering) It sounds like something really sexy is happening!”
If I had to do it over again, I wouldn’t have included that last line.
And, no, that’s not a submission. I’m not suggesting that the dog is thinking that. I’m just saying that my frist contribution would have been stronger if I left it more up to the viewer and didn’t feel obliged to spell it out for him/her.
The last line isn’t overkill. It takes something like that for slow people like me to get it.